Avoid Ash Like Dater Analysis

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Hmmmmm. Activeleash - from OKcupid . Let's count the ways why this message would get deleted after the first sentence. Hello there - very impersonal - almost comes off as a paste and glue. Basic puncutation expluded from sentence. This is a read flag for a basic education of does not pay nor care to pay attention to detail. In either cases it traslates to sonner or later he will not care. He must had majored in Study Hall. The third sentence if you say no to him be gets it, but don't say no and again he kills every rule of Grammar within half a sentence. He then agrees with him self by answering himself, telling himself he is a straight forward person, which means - he's not. If he was, why tell him. Avoid Ash like dater.

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