A. Hook/Attention getter: Did you know? Among 42% of youth have been reported to be victim to cyber-bullying, according to 2010 CBS News report.
B. General Statement: It is a serious impact of social networking addict or also could be defined to someone with a compulsion to excess social network for hours on end.
C. Thesis statement: Three consequence of social network addiction are cyber-bullying, decreased productivity and privacy.
II. Body
A. Topic statement: As stated before, cyber-bullying effected when they spending too much time on social network.
1. Supporting point 1: Kids especially are vulnerable to the practice of cyber-bullying in which the perpetrators, anonymously terrorize individuals in front of their …show more content…
Sub-sub-supporting point 2: While at one moment a photo of friends at her party seem harmless, the image may appear less attractive in the context of an employer doing a background check.
2. Supporting point 2: Most social network sites allow their users to control who sees the things they’ve posted, such limitations are often forgotten.
a. Sub-supporting point 1: It is still can be difficult to control and could be dangerous to its user.
III. Conclusion
A. Restatement of the thesis statement: There is still no agreement that social network addiction is pathological or should be considered as medical disorder yet the effects can cause so much trouble in our life.
B. Suggestion/recommendation 1: Sherry Turkle, a researcher at the Massachussetts Institute of Technology, has written extensively about the impact of social network on relationships, theorizing that they actually weaken human ties. In her book, Alone Together: Why We Expect More from Technology and Less from Each Other, she chronicles some of the negative impacts of constantly being connected by technology, which paradoxically can leave people feeling more alone.
However, still other researchers have conclude that social networking can make people feel better about themselves and more connected to society, if it is used