Dear student, I am writing this letter to inform you that you have made a couple of errors in your essay “Athletes and their Salaries.” The format of your essay was acceptable all the way through to the conclusion. However, the reference page’s format was inacceptable since it was not indented and double spaced. The other mistake I noticed was that the reference page did not have a title. Moving away from the reference page, I clearly saw that the thesis was perfect and clear. The assignment’s length was totally acceptable, it met the page requirements. The main “issue” I had with your title is that it does not attract readers. My question is what about Athletes and their Salaries? You should have rephrased the title in order to get the audience’s
