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If you could make a significant change to the structure or appearance of your school, what would it be? Identify the change you would make, and explain why you would make it.

If I could change or add anything to the school I would create another cafeteria to the middle school. This change could be crucial to my school.

The main reason I want to make a cafeteria is it would expand my school’s size. Are school is pretty small and a new cafeteria would make it a whole lot bigger. A cafeteria would be a great change to my school, not only for looks but also in size.

I would also do it so students wouldn't have to walk all the way to the high school to eat lunch. Are middle school and high school are connected and the only

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