Thesis Statement:
In 1807, François Isaac de Rivaz designed the first car powered by an internal combustion engine fueled by hydrogen. By 1950’s there were more than 67 million cars registered in the United State. In 2014 USA was home to 256 million cars. Based on these numbers we can say that Americans are relaying on vehicles as the number one way of transportation. Being part of this game changing way of commuting comes with a price.
Audience Consideration:
The audience that will be reading my essay are all students and most in there 20’s. Since this is a younger group I’m guessing most of them are into vehicles. The topic of my essay will be about: Why do people rely so much on vehicles. I will make sure my point of view will not be misunderstood and sound like Cox from the Air Conditioning essay for those who read it. I will use a lot of facts and examples in my essay that hopefuls get the reader’s attention. I know how nowadays especially the younger crowd likes to research everything. My plan is to keep them engaged with the research I did and bring in as many and accurate facts as possible. I don’t want my essay to be just another assignment for the students. I want them to learn something from it and maybe apply it to everyday living. …show more content…
Since 1807, the year of the first car made, we have not looked back. We relay on vehicles way too much. Manufactory Company’s are breaking records each year with the high production of vehicles. I know how important they are for commuting, building, destroying, and pleasure. Even though vehicles are such a big help, it also has its down sides Vehicles are the leaders in pollution and it affects the world in different aspects like: human health and
In 1807, François Isaac de Rivaz designed the first car powered by an internal combustion engine fueled by hydrogen. By 1950’s there were more than 67 million cars registered in the United State. In 2014 USA was home to 256 million cars. Based on these numbers we can say that Americans are relaying on vehicles as the number one way of transportation. Being part of this game changing way of commuting comes with a price.
Audience Consideration:
The audience that will be reading my essay are all students and most in there 20’s. Since this is a younger group I’m guessing most of them are into vehicles. The topic of my essay will be about: Why do people rely so much on vehicles. I will make sure my point of view will not be misunderstood and sound like Cox from the Air Conditioning essay for those who read it. I will use a lot of facts and examples in my essay that hopefuls get the reader’s attention. I know how nowadays especially the younger crowd likes to research everything. My plan is to keep them engaged with the research I did and bring in as many and accurate facts as possible. I don’t want my essay to be just another assignment for the students. I want them to learn something from it and maybe apply it to everyday living. …show more content…
Since 1807, the year of the first car made, we have not looked back. We relay on vehicles way too much. Manufactory Company’s are breaking records each year with the high production of vehicles. I know how important they are for commuting, building, destroying, and pleasure. Even though vehicles are such a big help, it also has its down sides Vehicles are the leaders in pollution and it affects the world in different aspects like: human health and