Deceleration Reflective Essay

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I rushed to finish typing my paper the night before it was due, barely comprehending the words I typed, hit the print button, and put the paper in my binder. Prior to enrolling in dual credit Composition, I had been just barely putting enough effort in to get A’s in my English courses and dual credit American History when it came to writing papers. The techniques I have learned throughout this course have encouraged me to cogitate more about my paper topics, allowing me to better convey messages to the reader.
The notion of an implicit thesis goes past the basic explicit thesis that I have always used in my writing. An implicit thesis is not stated directly within the finished written product. In order to have an effective implicit thesis,
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Deceleration involves deliberate slowing down of thought to take in information in a more conducive manner. When we learned about deceleration, we used this concept in taking field notes at a chosen location to write an essay describing it. In order to be successful in determining a dominant impression to control the tone of my paper, I spent a long period of time at my location, the soccer practice field, writing down every detail that I noticed, until I got to less superficial features. Fresh dominant impressions do not simply come to a person in the blink of an eye, profound thoughts take concentration. Deceleration can apply to many situations in learning to allow me to articulate my thoughts …show more content…
Making a deliberate choice for the organization of paragraphs helps make a point and maintain focus. Writers who wish to show how something changed over time would likely choose to put their paragraphs in chronological order, but writers discussing causes of an event may opt for a different approach, such as starting with well-known causes and progressing to less apparent causes. In the past with my writing, such as with my profile essay which was murky and difficult to follow, I typically just wrote the paragraphs as I came up with ideas, giving little thought to their organization. Now, I have realized the difference it can make to have a purposeful paragraph sequence, instead of leaving it up to chance. Planning paragraph sequence in the future will result in more convincing argumentative essays and easy-to-follow informative essays.
Learning to write a web conclusion elicited a deeper chain of thought in drawing connections for the reader than other types of conclusions I had used in the past. Web conclusions place the topic of the paper in a larger context for comparison or contrast. For example, an unfamiliar concept can be compared to an everyday idea to ensure the reader understands how it works and relates to other things. The ability to place ideas in a broader context will help me to keep the reader on track with something he may be able to relate to

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