Goodall’s essay is much more convincing because it is much more different to argue against her statements than it is to argue against Sabin’s conclusion. Goodwill’s argumentative persuasive essay is well-formed because she attempts to understand both extremes of the dilemma, does not see the issue in black and white, personifies animals, mentions alternatives to animal testing, uses all-inclusive terminology and calls for an open discussion. On the other hand, Sabin’s argument is weaker, and her statements are easier to argue against because she does not consider the other extreme, lumps organizations together and tries too hard to humanize her husband, which shows extreme bias. She outright demonizes those who oppose animal testing and indirectly blames them of being ignorant. Sabin’s argument would have been stronger if she stated some reasons why animal testing is considered inhumane and provided some ethical, logical and emotional appeal to debunk those reasons in a mature and appropriate
Goodall’s essay is much more convincing because it is much more different to argue against her statements than it is to argue against Sabin’s conclusion. Goodwill’s argumentative persuasive essay is well-formed because she attempts to understand both extremes of the dilemma, does not see the issue in black and white, personifies animals, mentions alternatives to animal testing, uses all-inclusive terminology and calls for an open discussion. On the other hand, Sabin’s argument is weaker, and her statements are easier to argue against because she does not consider the other extreme, lumps organizations together and tries too hard to humanize her husband, which shows extreme bias. She outright demonizes those who oppose animal testing and indirectly blames them of being ignorant. Sabin’s argument would have been stronger if she stated some reasons why animal testing is considered inhumane and provided some ethical, logical and emotional appeal to debunk those reasons in a mature and appropriate