Should Animal Testing be banned?
Introductory paragraph (introduces the topic)
Attention-getter; Imagine, being taken away from your family, and living inside a crowded cage in a laboratory without ever seeing daylight again. Every day, animals are being forcefully held down and strapped, while a scientist has a new drug or chemical product to test on their bodies. This is an example, of a daily experience an innocent animal has to obtain for the rest of their life.
Necessary sentences/transition sentences/information; Tested animals are held in captivity for the sake of finding new methods to cure diseases or simply for observation and examination.
Thesis Statement; Although animal testing is beneficial in some cases, animal testing is cruel …show more content…
Supporting Ideas; "The term "animal testing" refers to procedures performed on living animals for purposes of research into basic biology and disease, asserting the effectiveness of new medicinal products, and testing the human health and/or environmental safety of consumer and industry products such as cosmetics, household cleaners, food additives, pharmaceuticals and industrial/Argo-chemicals" (HSI).
Closing/transition sentence; "Animals testing is justified because the animals are sacrificed to make products safer for human use and consumption" (Lonestar).
B. Sub-Reason 2- Why is animal testing still being used?
Topic sentence; Especially towards the medical field, animal testing is still productive everyday because their is scientists who are finding possible cures or chemicals to cure diseases, such as, cancer, HIV, or asthma.
Supporting ideas; "Animal experiments have been used for centuries, and due to those experiments medical progress has been made during that time, therefore, animal experiments must be necessary" …show more content…
B. Sub-Reason 2- Effects of animals inside crowded laboratories?
Topic sentence; Due to the effects they encounter afterwards from the products, animal testing causes physical and mental pain.
Supporting ideas; "Tested animals spend their lives in barren cages, unable to make choices or express natural behaviors. Most never experience fresh air or sunshine, only bars and concrete. Standard lab conditions are small crowded cages, lack of enrichment, loud noises, and bright lighting are all known to create stress in animals who in turn show physical symptoms of the stress, including chronic inflammatory conditions" (Neavs).
Closing/transition sentence; Not only, is it inhuman to allow these animals experience this daily routine on an everyday basis but they are provided with few federal laws and protection.
C. Sub-Reason 3- Why do they receive such few laws and no inspection? (Legal
Introductory paragraph (introduces the topic)
Attention-getter; Imagine, being taken away from your family, and living inside a crowded cage in a laboratory without ever seeing daylight again. Every day, animals are being forcefully held down and strapped, while a scientist has a new drug or chemical product to test on their bodies. This is an example, of a daily experience an innocent animal has to obtain for the rest of their life.
Necessary sentences/transition sentences/information; Tested animals are held in captivity for the sake of finding new methods to cure diseases or simply for observation and examination.
Thesis Statement; Although animal testing is beneficial in some cases, animal testing is cruel …show more content…
Supporting Ideas; "The term "animal testing" refers to procedures performed on living animals for purposes of research into basic biology and disease, asserting the effectiveness of new medicinal products, and testing the human health and/or environmental safety of consumer and industry products such as cosmetics, household cleaners, food additives, pharmaceuticals and industrial/Argo-chemicals" (HSI).
Closing/transition sentence; "Animals testing is justified because the animals are sacrificed to make products safer for human use and consumption" (Lonestar).
B. Sub-Reason 2- Why is animal testing still being used?
Topic sentence; Especially towards the medical field, animal testing is still productive everyday because their is scientists who are finding possible cures or chemicals to cure diseases, such as, cancer, HIV, or asthma.
Supporting ideas; "Animal experiments have been used for centuries, and due to those experiments medical progress has been made during that time, therefore, animal experiments must be necessary" …show more content…
B. Sub-Reason 2- Effects of animals inside crowded laboratories?
Topic sentence; Due to the effects they encounter afterwards from the products, animal testing causes physical and mental pain.
Supporting ideas; "Tested animals spend their lives in barren cages, unable to make choices or express natural behaviors. Most never experience fresh air or sunshine, only bars and concrete. Standard lab conditions are small crowded cages, lack of enrichment, loud noises, and bright lighting are all known to create stress in animals who in turn show physical symptoms of the stress, including chronic inflammatory conditions" (Neavs).
Closing/transition sentence; Not only, is it inhuman to allow these animals experience this daily routine on an everyday basis but they are provided with few federal laws and protection.
C. Sub-Reason 3- Why do they receive such few laws and no inspection? (Legal