Analysis Of The Volcano: A Dairy By Rayneshia Dorito

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The Volcano: A Dairy by Rayneshia Dorito
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Whish! The volcano beneath rayneshia was brewing and all she had to do was tell them where the money is. “I don’t know what you guys are talking about” she said with the guy towering over her near the volcano. You know what I am talking about you got only 2 seconds to tell me or I am throwing you over the guy, witch was very tall and with a big black fedora on his head, I don’t know what you guys are talking about I'm only 6 years old as rayneshia felt the lava heat pure up on her, it was as hot as putting your hand over a steaming pot of water, I'm sorry I cried I don't have any of your money please don't do anything
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Bling my phone went off who did I just get a text massage from and it was a unfamiliar number Rayneshia it is your friend from the strip club what a way u party yesterday you gambled away over 100,000 thousand dollars what a night for you, but how are u going to pay the guy back that loan you that the the casino cause he keeps on calling my phone and askingwhere you are, so when u get a chance hit me up. Teshia, O this is from Teshia I should save her number to my phone but what is she talking about that I got a loan, before I knew it I saw on the clock it said 3:30 time to get ready for …show more content…
I did the normal I was a bartender so I would serve drinks and get tips from people for doing my job, I had 2 hours of work left when I see Teshia running at me all worried and a dismantled face, what's wrong Teshia but I called her Tina for short, she took a big gulp, "the guys that u got a loan from there expecting there money today and they said they coming if they don't have it in the next hour." When she said that I felt my heart drop out of my body, my fingertips started to sweat, what do u mean today I don't remember even asking for it, how much do u have on you none. Whish the noise of the valcano startled me like a rabbit seeing a lion, woo hoo the lady's went wild, we have reach over 100,000 dollars today. The valcano is the strip club that I worked in w had a 4 foot valcano with real lava in it, it was as hot as oil on the frying pan nobody ever got dared to get close to it. As Me and Tina went back to work, thoughts was racing though my head like it was a track meet, what if I get killed because I don't have there money keep coming on my mind and before I knew it Tina came up to me and showed my the phone is said unknown number."Don't pick it up I said" we have to she replied, but how I'm I going to get the money, I don't know just talk to them as I pick up I heard a raspy dark voiced in the tone guy say "where is my

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