Analysis Of The Poem 'The Colonel' By Carolyn Forche

Great Essays
The Colonel
“What you have heard is true.” (Line 1) War stories are often told in books and more often depicted in motion pictures. Whatever the case is we all know what war is about but yet we the lucky few that have yet to experience it have no idea what it really is. Carolyn Forche brilliantly captures her war experience in the poem “The Colonel”, it is so blunt that one could easily mistake it for something else. The poem paints a really straightforward view into a simple scene that allows us a small window into the lives of people at war. There’s no fairytale ending and there’s no hero to immortalize here, it’s a dirty ugly picture that portrays the effects of war and how drastically it affects the lives of those involved. It is true that
…show more content…
The poem begins slowly with an inventory of facts and details as if it was about something neighborly. “His wife carried a tray of coffee and sugar. His daughter filed her nails, his son went out for the night” (1-2). The mundane details of the colonel’s life like his wife, his children, and his western luxurious life made him seem normal. No one would ever suspect that a killer lived in the very same house Forche visited, as the setting encounter seemed very domestic and gave us a feeling of homeliness. However, the poem begins to change into a darker side as Forche mentions the pistol on the cushion. This gave a sense of indication that something was wrong, as if the Colonel was not even safe in his own house. It seemed like he had to protect himself at all …show more content…
He spilled many human ears on the table. They were like dried peach halves. There is no other way to say this. He took one of them in his hands, shook it in our faces, dropped it into a water glass. It came alive there.” (20-25). This was the climax of the poem, because one moment everyone was sitting eating dinner and the next, ears were being poured out of a grocery bag onto the table. This was vivid proof of the Colonels heinous acts, which is very sickening. The ears were cut off from once-living people as bounty/trophies to show that they killed them. There was neither compassion nor mercy shown by the colonel and his actions. “I am tired of fooling around he said. As for the rights of anyone, tell your people they can go fuck themselves.” (26-31). This was a clear indication that he was just a cruel and barbaric person. One wonders how someone can turn out to be like that, is it a matter of choice? Or is the colonel and his actions a product of circumstance? I believe that it is a combination of

Related Documents

  • Decent Essays

    A correct of use writing techniques can make readers to understand the message you want to pass to them more clearly and simplicity. “The Eyes of the Poor” by Charles Baudelaire and “The Colonel” by Carolyn Forche, both of the author use the description, try to bring people into the same situation with them. And both of them are narrative of their personal experience. The mostly important part from their prose poems are, even the people say nothing in front of you, you can still try to read their mind from their eyes. Both of the prose poems from two different authors but if you read them and contrast them, you can still find out there are many common between them ad had the same…

    • 126 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Although people think soldiers are characterized as tough killing machines, they are still humans with emotions, memories and lives beyond the military. According to soldiers, it is not easy being a soldier and living the life as a soldier. Life as a soldier has many struggles that people do not see and often go unaccounted for. This common dilemma comes to light in the short story “The Things They Carried” by Tim O’Brien. The burden of war on soldiers is more than physical strain.…

    • 780 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    As History shows us, war at times can be preventable and at time it is not. In the long run, war has an everlasting effect on soldiers whether it is directly or indirectly. In some cases, the horror of war is at time difficult for us to understand how men and women in the battlefield cope in times of fear. The poem "Facing it" by Yusef Komunyakaa allows us the readers to see what happen during and after the war, and what mentally goes through one 's mind in terms of how one copes with the war and how one deals with their mental breakdown during and after the war. The Poem "Facing It" demonstrates how the effect of war can most likely damage one 's life due to PTSD (Posttraumatic Stress Disorder).…

    • 1612 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Brian Turner’s poem At Lowe’s Home Improvement Center describes how a simple, everyday setting can strike a reminder of how dreadful a war is. Turner’s poem also look at the idea of how small of a topic the nation portrays war such as which landscaping magazine to get or which stone marble best suit the kitchen whereas oversee, lives are put on the line. Myrna Bein’s story, A Journey Taken with My Son gives the sense that war is a “timeless and universal grief” and describes how all mothers universally feel for their child risking their lives in doing something they have no answer or see an outcome for. I feel both of these selections alone help me understand more about the meaning of war along with the damage that it brings and that the everlasting ripples of wars reminds everyone that war is timeless. Not only is it timeless, but one must give more of themselves into reaching out to those that are involved and hear their stories or at the very least, use the abundant amount of resources around to overcome the ignorance that the norm has towards…

    • 610 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    From 1955 to 1975, American soldiers were fighting a war in Vietnam. During this time Marine Lieutenant Philip Caputo landed at Da Nang with the first ground combat unit deployed to Vietnam. Months later, having served on the line in one of history’s ugliest wars, he returned home. Physically whole but emotionally impacted, his adolescent beliefs forever gone. In his book, A Rumor Of War, Philip Caputo offers an insightful analysis regarding the psychological damages a soldier faces post-war.…

    • 1530 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    What if it was a world that was declining towards extinction already? A post-apocalyptic world? Bradbury was able to give readers a glimpse of the kind of future the family lived in and, most importantly, gave away the type of person the mother was, so to speak. Mrs. McClellan’s favorite poem, according to the house: “Sarah Teasdale.…

    • 945 Words
    • 4 Pages
    • 2 Works Cited
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The poem describes the boys as if they were in the military. Rank plays a significant role in how the boys treat one another. By showing how the boys act towards one another, the poem shows how horrific the stereotype that males are given can be. A fine example of how violent the boys are, is when they all come to an agreement with who they are able to kill, “We could easily kill a two-year-old, he says in his clear voice.” (Olds).…

    • 1004 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Therefore, readers are able to conclude that war affects the lives of soldiers as well as the citizens. Turner’s use of anaphora forces the readers to reflect on the true meaning of war and as well as how it can affect a soldier’s life. In addition, Turner’s use of anaphora depicts the traumatic experience as well as the aftershock of war that American soldiers undergo during and after combat. The readers are also able to argue that before combat a soldier has his or her peace, freedom, and strength; however, after combat, his or her minds are no longer stable; therefore, their peace, freedom, and strength has been jeopardized—life is no longer seen the same. Based on my perspective and Turner’s poem, “The Put Locker,” I am able to argue that a war veteran’s state of mind will forever remain in the “aftershock” stage, until his or her death, especially, since war is a traumatic experience.…

    • 1033 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    For example, Lieutenant Cross’s constant thought and fixation on his girlfriend Martha wasn’t healthy and results in the death of Tom Lavender. Over the course of the war, his love turned to hatred and then became a mix of both, and he blamed himself for Tom’s death because of his constant distraction. He tries to be a respectable officer but continuously finds himself drifting back to Martha, highlighting one of the more common ways soldiers cope with the horrors of war. In the same way that Kiowa read his bible or Curt Lemon played around, Cross thought about Martha, and this leads indirectly to Tom Lavender’s death. Similarly, there is a story told about Mark Fossie and his girlfriend, Mary Anne.…

    • 798 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    First and foremost, the surroundings that the Colonel places himself in recits the reminders of his pain. The story begins with the announcement that a duel is taking place in the barracks. Interestly, the use of the word barracks parallels his wound as there are hardships of one when in war. Then, the Colonel travels to the Grey Arabian tavern, where he distinctively decides to sit down on a table with…

    • 1218 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    World War 1 was believed to be the war that would end all wars. It was new, exciting and was expected to be over before the Christmas of 1914. Then, 4 years later, after gruesome trench warfare and severe casualties, our views on war changed completely. The days of enthusiastic enlistment dissolved, while the horrifying reality about the battlefield emerged. This change in beliefs, and the influence of generations, can be seen accurately through the poems, “Dulce Et Decorum Est” by Wilfred Owen and “Pro Patria” by Owen Seaman.…

    • 1060 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The poem ‘War Photographer’ addresses the tragedies that take place at war and the issues in the way the western world perceive the photos that raise awareness to these horrible situations. The strong feelings of frustration, love of his job and suffering are portrayed throughout the poem. The photographer is ‘finally’ alone implying that he is welcoming his solitary connotes that his company was not welcoming. This is most likely due to the fact that the majority of them would be soldiers and depressed people stuck in the middle of a war torn country. The protagonist in this poem is in a dark room where the only light available is ‘red’.…

    • 963 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    But in reality, their youth was being wasted on the cold, dull battlefield. Their dreams were forgotten and all that left of them were futility. Moreover, the words, such as ‘stare’, ‘dazed’, ‘drowse’, and ‘dozed’, slows down the poem enabling the readers to empathise futility that the soldiers feel. Furthermore, the use of half rhyme gives a sense of dissatisfaction to readers.…

    • 1191 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Within this essay, two poems will be discussed and compared to distinguish which of these poems would be considered the most powerful at portraying the theme of the realities of was. The chosen poems, Freedoms Horror was written in 2010 by James Clark and Dulce et Decorum Est was written in 1917 by Wilfred Owen. The theme of both poems is the realities of war. These poems are among the thousands of other poems that are categorized as war poetry.…

    • 1160 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    When Britain declared war on the Axis powers in 1914, many young English men saw this as an opportunity for bravery, glory, and chivalry. As the war escalated many people started to change their view as they saw the brutalities of the fighting. This war had a big influence on poetry in future decades. The main difference between the attitude towards the war sparked from the poet's tone. The tone varies from seeing the war as glorious, to it being a dreadful experience.…

    • 1302 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Great Essays