She knows how to puts a sentence together that will make you think about what you read on a moral level (Marcotte n. pag.). She knows when to appeal to certain emotions throughout her article to build off of those feelings. Comparing this to Babich’s article where he doesn’t use emotions as well as Marcotte. His emotional appeals weren’t as well constructed as Marcotte’s. The strongest element for Babich was his analyzation. He analyzed his evidence wonderfully every time he could and always connected it back to the main idea of the article. He used his evidence as a tool to make you think about what he was writing and it swayed you to his way of thinking. No analyzation seemed to stray from the main point of female protagonists in kids movie falling off (Babich n. pag.). Marcotte’s strength was also her weakness. When appealing to emotion she sometimes got lost and didn’t use logic to back her claims up. She also gets carried away when talking about sexism in the real world, sometimes not even relating it back to “Brave” (Marcotte n. pag.). The weakest part of Babich’s article was when he justified the sexism in children’s movies today (Babich n. pag.). It seemed to give you mixed signals and was overall confusing about the point he was trying to make. He strays from his main point to show the opposing side but it messes the flow up and leads the reader on a
She knows how to puts a sentence together that will make you think about what you read on a moral level (Marcotte n. pag.). She knows when to appeal to certain emotions throughout her article to build off of those feelings. Comparing this to Babich’s article where he doesn’t use emotions as well as Marcotte. His emotional appeals weren’t as well constructed as Marcotte’s. The strongest element for Babich was his analyzation. He analyzed his evidence wonderfully every time he could and always connected it back to the main idea of the article. He used his evidence as a tool to make you think about what he was writing and it swayed you to his way of thinking. No analyzation seemed to stray from the main point of female protagonists in kids movie falling off (Babich n. pag.). Marcotte’s strength was also her weakness. When appealing to emotion she sometimes got lost and didn’t use logic to back her claims up. She also gets carried away when talking about sexism in the real world, sometimes not even relating it back to “Brave” (Marcotte n. pag.). The weakest part of Babich’s article was when he justified the sexism in children’s movies today (Babich n. pag.). It seemed to give you mixed signals and was overall confusing about the point he was trying to make. He strays from his main point to show the opposing side but it messes the flow up and leads the reader on a