Monster Descriptive Writing

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The Big Bad Monster

The beast was vicious. He came out of the shadows to reveal his hideous face, He had large red eyes and demonic horns on his head . He snout looked like the one of a giant bull . His entire face was covered in thick black scales when he opened his mouth it revealed several rows of large pincer of teeth. His body was bulbous and his horns sticking out randomly from his scaly skin. His devilish eyes pierced through my soul from the crack in my closet door. I would often put my head under the cover hoping the monster would kindly disappear but the floor thumped loudly coming towards me with every step making the bed shaked. My body was frozen but I screamed as loud as i could until my voice cracked . The cover snatched off
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We’ve found a tumor in her brain that caused her to have a seizure. “ My Mother started to cry . I tuned everything else out after the word cancer it repeated its in my head with a echo I always heard about cancer and how it was a big deal but I never knew anyone with it. When the rest of my family arrived the doctor gave them each the last speech and I saw the tears swelled up in their eyes. After that things began to change my Auntie’s skin toned faded and so did my family’s smile . I noticed her hair thinning . My Auntie’s personality never changed though she remained the same goofy , sociable , and energetic . Soon the hospital became her new home . We watched as she undergoes multiple small surgeries soon she was completely bald. She would joked her head looked like a coconut which it did. Things were kind of bad for months she would be fine one day than the next she would be under constant watch after having a seizure. On the day of the big surgery of her we all waited around all night waiting for news preferably happy . After the surgery things got better for my Auntie , my family , and me . My Auntie made strong recovery although it wasn’t speedy . After seeing the stuff first that cancer patients and family of those deal with I became involved in helping those once I even raised the most money in “ Make A wish . “ We were lucky and I seen family who hadn 't experienced the same luck so I enjoy trying to help people through the tough situation

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