The inquiry paper “Smokin”, by John Seilman was a very interesting inquiry. It was a good example of a well done experiment write up. Even though the inquiry and write up was good, there is a way that the paper could have been great. John Seilman did somethings well on his paper, the student could have improved in three main areas of a usual inquiry write up, and after reading this a lot of more comments and curiosity took place.
The paper had many great points. The topic was interesting. The topic was about ant’s ability to use their antennas to find sugar measured at different distance, and using smoke as a variable to test. Ants can be a part of everyday life, it can be irritating, so knowing how far ants can sense sugar, and a variable
The paper had many great points. The topic was interesting. The topic was about ant’s ability to use their antennas to find sugar measured at different distance, and using smoke as a variable to test. Ants can be a part of everyday life, it can be irritating, so knowing how far ants can sense sugar, and a variable