One of the essay’s strength is its context and relation to the reader. Dog’s knowledge of the audience’s axioms and what they expect from her essay was a major tool that leads them to get involved in her argument. Dog’s starts with an overview of Indians’ struggle in the boarding schools and then she used the rest of the essay for what the audience wants out from her autobiography which is her own struggle at one of these schools. Another way, in which Dog is appealing to …show more content…
Mary’s goal is to inform the reader and clearly describe the unbearable situation of the students. In paragraph 1, for instance, she compares the Indian students to “the victims of Nazi concentration camps”. In paragraph 4, she uses another metaphor to describe the same situation as she says: “The girls’ wing was built like an F and was run like a penal institution”. Dog’s style makes the essay more enjoyable as she drives the story from incident to another. She also adds explanation and some comments to the unclear parts of the story where noteworthy information is found. This apparent in paragraph 9 where she mentioned the German fathers for the “sake of