Hello Jesus Gestelum,
Based on your article, I can see how you arrange the author's opinion and the intention of the statement is very brief and very detailed. The most important point from your article is the quote you give, it is not too long nor too short but includes all the necessary and authentic information on the topic you are talking about. " Lack of exercise is also a major culprit in the obesity epidemic. It’s been decades since most Americans worked in fields and on factory floors, a far greater majority of us are sitting throughout our workday. This means less exercise each day. According to one study, only 20% of today’s jobs require at least moderate physical activity, as opposed to 50% of jobs in 1960", this is the quote you
Based on your article, I can see how you arrange the author's opinion and the intention of the statement is very brief and very detailed. The most important point from your article is the quote you give, it is not too long nor too short but includes all the necessary and authentic information on the topic you are talking about. " Lack of exercise is also a major culprit in the obesity epidemic. It’s been decades since most Americans worked in fields and on factory floors, a far greater majority of us are sitting throughout our workday. This means less exercise each day. According to one study, only 20% of today’s jobs require at least moderate physical activity, as opposed to 50% of jobs in 1960", this is the quote you