Heever And The Camping Trip Analysis

Heever and the Camping Trip of Troop 129

There once was a boy. His name was Heever, a boy scout that was around 10 and very close to 11. His troop 129 was going on a camping trip. He was very excited for the camping trip. However, Heever was a very clumsy boy. All the troop said that he shouldn’t go to the trip because he always brakes stuff. He is very scared of sharp objects, so he couldn’t help half of the time. Heever ignored his troop, but since he ignored them, that is where the trouble began.
The mornig before his trip, he went to school, he was very distracted, and he forgot to bring his homework to school. He got in big trouble from his teacher, Mrs. Hiccups. She said that he needed to redo his homework. But, that did not make …show more content…
In the meantime, Heever went to put some oil in the track so he would go faster he wanted to cheat! But the track was in the front loge. Heever had to wait for the people to go away. But someone stayed at the loge. Heever was nervous he said that he was going to win over and over again. Heever went to see the race track again to see if anyone was there, but at this time there wasn’t anybody there to guard it. Heever knew that he was the first to race and in which lane he was. Heever went in and spread oil on his lane . When he was leaving, he saw a camera in the loge. He said to himself “I have to get that camera down before they notice I did that”. Heever went to get the camera. When he got it, he accidently dropped the camera. He got nervous and ran away. When he got back to his tent he saw one of the leaders asking if anyone knew who knocked the camera down. Heever ran quickly to the group. As soon as he got there, the group of kids said no. Heever said to himself that it was a close one. In about 3 hours, they were going to race thier cars. Heever was very excited for the race that was coming. He was more than ready he was SUPER READY! When it was about 2 hours away for the race, Heever went to the race track which was outside. Heever put more oil on the …show more content…
Heever wanted to go eat something, but as soon as he left, a leader said that he had to stay near his track so he wouldn’t be late for the race. Heever said that he was hungry, but the leader, named Don said “sorry but you have to stay”. Heever was very mad at Don. When the race came, Don announced “the first racers, would please come to get their cars?” When Heever got his car, he put it in the slot. When he put it there, he felt that the oil was drying up. Heever got scared because he thought he might lose. But, he won. He had to wait when they announced the winner. Heever got super happy that he got 2nd place! When they got back to the tents, Don the leader said “somebody put oil on the track, we have three suspects: Floppy, Heever, and Deb”. Somebody said that it was Heever because he was the only out of his tent, and that he rushed to see the track. Heever said that he did do it because he said that his car design wouldn’t be fast for him to win, so he got some oil from Deb. The leader took the trophy away from Heever and gave it to the third-place winner, who gave his trophy to the fourth-place kid. Heever got nothing. He went to packing his stuff