In Blom’s essay, there are two organizing principle: spatial and topical. However, it’s mostly topical that she describes about one specific thing that she enjoys with her friend. The beginning of the essay is spatial because she describes where she’s being outside then moving inside. Cepek’s essay is more spatial and chronological. He describes his essay by reciting the certain time of the day out of his memory to express the way people are in the cold street. Both writers use simile to add entertainment to the essays. In Blom’s essay, she says “My hands feel like ice,” and “The warm air hits my face and surrounds it like a downy pillow.” The way she describes the subjects around her is very creative especially when she says the warm air surrounds it like a downy pillow. Cepek uses the most enjoy use of language: people’s ears function like a car’s brake lights. The phrase just remind the readers to imagine how cold outside of Czech Republic
In Blom’s essay, there are two organizing principle: spatial and topical. However, it’s mostly topical that she describes about one specific thing that she enjoys with her friend. The beginning of the essay is spatial because she describes where she’s being outside then moving inside. Cepek’s essay is more spatial and chronological. He describes his essay by reciting the certain time of the day out of his memory to express the way people are in the cold street. Both writers use simile to add entertainment to the essays. In Blom’s essay, she says “My hands feel like ice,” and “The warm air hits my face and surrounds it like a downy pillow.” The way she describes the subjects around her is very creative especially when she says the warm air surrounds it like a downy pillow. Cepek uses the most enjoy use of language: people’s ears function like a car’s brake lights. The phrase just remind the readers to imagine how cold outside of Czech Republic