The candid nature of the voice jolts the reader out of the child’s vision, pulling them back into reality. It removes the curtain of romanticism, exposing readers to the horrors of war. In using the semicolon, this short phrase is expanded upon, because the stones are not only red from blood, but from blood belonging to wounded soldiers. The “less desperately wounded” suggests that only some of the soldiers made it that far, and there were more injured ones who were unable to cross. But even in crossing the creek, the chances of their survival are low due to the fire burning ahead of them outside the
The candid nature of the voice jolts the reader out of the child’s vision, pulling them back into reality. It removes the curtain of romanticism, exposing readers to the horrors of war. In using the semicolon, this short phrase is expanded upon, because the stones are not only red from blood, but from blood belonging to wounded soldiers. The “less desperately wounded” suggests that only some of the soldiers made it that far, and there were more injured ones who were unable to cross. But even in crossing the creek, the chances of their survival are low due to the fire burning ahead of them outside the