Summary Of The Philosopher's Series

CAPOS presents as a proposed one-hour dramatic, crime pilot. It’s inspired by true events. The series focuses on the gritty and violent world of drug smuggling. As presented, the world is very authentic and believable.
The series has a unique hook, as it centers on the Mexico-US cartel connection. It’s fascinating to watch the drug smuggling trade world unfold, especially in Mexico where they use young kids. There’s no doubt that there are many gritty stories to be told and it’s easy to envision a long-term series.
It appears to have an open-ended type of structure, in which the storylines will continue from week to week, building in intensity with new plot lines and secrets revealed throughout the series. This gives the series an opportunity to explore the grisly drug trade …show more content…
There’s certainly a lot to like about this world. However, there are areas of the presentation that are worth discussing for further development. While the premise is very appealing, the pilot still can be more …show more content…
Perhaps the home invasion is not the best choice. Maybe Miguel and his men track down thugs to a warehouse that stole Miguel’s drugs. Show how he uses his skills and wit. He has to command the scene. Have him reveal information about himself – he can tell the thugs, he was once like them, a street gangster, but he aspired for more. He can tell them there’s no respect in stealing. He demands his supply back. Maybe he orders his men to kill them or not. The point is that he has to command the scene and for the audience to take notice of him. Then highlight his two contradictory worlds – the loving husband and father and the ruthless gangster. This will require really dynamic and powerful dialogue. Make sure he verbalizes his