I was a little confused with this story, when it comes the faces having a connection to Egyptian culture and it was difficult to understand. In addition, I was not for sure if everyone was sleeping together and it was a problem. Furthermore, the story seems to be significantly all over the place. Then, after reading the first page, I was thinking that this story would be about someone being in extracurricular or Athletic programs, which will lead to a love story. Kelly Link did not fulfill my promise; as I stated she took me on a whole other fictional adventures. It did not fulfill my promise because for one it was about girls being pyramids and boys collecting objects. However, I can see multiple topics that a reader can write about.
