Editorial Feedback I had the opportunity to read my classmate Ana Ortiz’s autobiography whom I enjoyed learning more about. The part about her sister getting Dengue virus made the autobiography more interesting. There were enough details about her personal life to allow readers to get a general idea of who she is. I liked that Ana focused on being a part of the Latino community, but she should expand on it. She should elaborate on how the Latino community impacted her health. Before I read the third paragraph, I thought the community she was focusing on was being a part of the COMHE community. In terms of grammatical errors, I made some suggestions on the paper. I noticed that there were a few run-on sentences and the use of tense did not
