Analysis Of An Ounce Of A Cure

Decent Essays
Relationships can cause differing levels of emotional and mental change, at least, that’s an idea in the stories “An Ounce of a Cure”, “Story of an Hour”, and “Girl”. Whether the relationship is between family members or has a more romantic origin can be a factor in how it affects the characters. In the story “An Ounce of a Cure”, is one of the most noticeable examples of the effect of turmoil between “lovers” on the characters emotional and mental state. The story is about a young girl of less than sixteen and a downward spiral of events after her High-School boyfriend Martin Collingwood broke up with her. She first displays her shift in emotional state a few weeks into their relationship when he kisses her for the first time, “I …show more content…
Mallard continues to grow in excitement towards her newfound freedom, “this possession of self-assentation which she suddenly recognized as the strongest impulse of her being” (151). The story displays the pinnacle of this newfound happiness with the statements, “she was drinking in the very elixir of life” (151) and “she breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday that she had thought with a shudder that life might be long” (151). These two sentences show us that she has gained a bit more clarity on the situation and is truly excited about her future, free from the restraints of her marriage and that her relationship had been causing her to have a dim outlook on her …show more content…
The story’s repeated use of phrases such as “on Sundays try to walk like a lady an not like the slut you are so bent on becoming” (163) and “this is how to behave in the presence of men who don’t know you very well, and this way they won’t recognize immediately the slut that I have warned you against becoming” (163) show us that the girl probably has some low self-esteem issues, due possibly by harsh and judgmental treatment by parental figures.
The story has a few points that would appear as a back and forth dialogue between the girl and a mother figure such as, “don’t sing benna in Sunday school… But I don’t sing benna on Sundays at all and never in Sunday school” (163). These dialogues being taken as the girl talking back and forth with herself, shows us a possibility of loneliness or lack of many outside relations, and a high amount of

Related Documents

  • Great Essays

    In the eyes of the mother, the child must do all these things in order to prevent herself from being shunned by the community and becoming a “slut”. Girl also has a set of expectations from her mother on how she should act and behave. Choosing not to behave the way she’s taught to could result in losing her social standing. The only time her mother show’s sympathy toward her daughter is when speaking of the relationships her daughter will one day have with men. Her mother tells her how men will bully her, and how she should respond to them.…

    • 1265 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Sometimes joy can be the collapse of you. As proven in the ‘The Story Of An Hour’. The MC (Ms. Mallard) is hearing of a news that her husband has died. Her sister with her husband try to explain it to her. As Ms. Mallard suffers from a weak heart they don't want to overwork herself and explain it gently.…

    • 344 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    There once was a girl, a girl with bright blood red hair. She was beautiful, stunning, and her name was Cleo. Cleo Redfield was her given name. On the outside she seemed like a happy normal girl, but inside, she had many dark feelings. Because of her beauty she was tormented everyday by other girls and all the guys.…

    • 1847 Words
    • 8 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Great Essays

    She compared her revelation to “drinking in a very elixir of life”(para 15, Chopin). She was happy to hear of her husband’s death because she was able to escape the confines of her marriage. Mrs. Mallard was free to be her own person, now that her husband could no longer control…

    • 1290 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Kincaid Girl

    • 583 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Kincaid, "Girl" "Wash the white clothes on Monday and put them on the stone heap; wash the color clothes on Tuesday and put them on the clothesline to dry. " This quote from the text shows how many details the mother is giving her daughter in her commands. The storyline revolves around the mother's commands. In the Girl a mother is discipline her daughter by giving her a series of commands to follow, with repetition, guides on how to act in certain situations, and how to become a better woman.…

    • 583 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In reading world literature, it becomes abundantly clear that the reality of women being subjected to different and sometimes harsh treatment by society is not a regional or even a national truth. It is a theme that is extended from the beginning of time until present day in literary works. While there are many examples of this truth, Jamaica Kincaid’s “Girl” is exceptionally poignant. Kincaid’s careful use of form and character identities work in perfect tandem to convey the truths of human femininity.…

    • 1118 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Upon hearing the news of her husband’s death, Mrs. Mallard is in a sudden grief and weeps at once. However, after she has calmed down and is alone in her room, she realizes she is now an independent woman. She sees all the spring days and summer days without her husband, and this excites her. When she acknowledges the joy, she feels possessed by it and must control herself from letting the word…

    • 771 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The story “The Story of an Hour” by Kate Chopin, opens a window into the life of a woman, Mrs. Mallard who suffers from a heart disease and receives news that her husband has died. According to the story, she reacted differently than other people would’ve done, but that is where irony is presented. She decided to isolate herself and during her isolation she realized how free and joyful she was feeling, but the real feelings in her heart were loneliness ,emptiness, and fear because of the loss. Mrs. Mallard did not die of joy, she died because she was full of fear,confusion, and loneliness. Chopin decides to put this dramatic scene of Mrs. Mallard in a room of her house, where the couple spent plenty time together.…

    • 1059 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    The daughter is portrayed as timid, and consequently only speaks twice, in which she defends her innocence to her mother: “But I don’t sing benna on Sundays at all and never in Sunday school…” (Kincaid 483). The mother does not respond to the daughter adding to the dismissive characterization of the mother. The instructions the mother gives show the girl “how to perform and protect oneself from discrimination when she is under the proverbial watchful eye of this patriarchal community,” (Bailey 111). In this society, female power is limited, and it is made evident that women only control their domestic responsibilities and their sexuality.…

    • 1412 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Mothers, grandmothers, and stepmothers play an important role in every child 's life. They show and tell their child what to do. In the short story “Girl,” written by Jamaica Kincaid, a mother is doing just that. She is telling her daughter what to do and how to do it. “Girl” is more complex than a simple list of instructions and how-to’s.…

    • 1470 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Another ironic point is made in the statement: “She breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long” (284). The irony is that her prayer was answered on her husband 's behalf, but not for her in that she died from a heart attack. In addition to this irony of life and death, the readers are confronted with yet another strong use of irony in this short story. The oxymoronic “monstrous joy” that describes Mrs. Mallard 's initial elation with the news of independence from her husband differs from the joy that is described in the last line of the story (284).…

    • 1403 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Great Essays

    Mallard heard the news,her action is intense and extremely grieved, she was like a loyal people suddenly lost their great king. Such reactions, reflects her totally dependent on her husband in a patriarchal society,she fell into an extremely humble status and it led her bring about another extreme emotion when her calm down quickly. After the sad,’Free!Body and soul free!’ she kept whispering. Apparently, she fell into extreme gladness,she believed that she finally have the freedom and she is no longer limited by patriarchal society.…

    • 950 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Mallard expresses the evidence of her life. She is described as “young, with a fair, calm face, whose lines bespoke repression” (288). Her youth is intact and draws the idea that she was a young girl, not ready to be tied down when she married. The tranquility of her face, and the later description of her “dull stare” (288) suggests a sense of compliance. Her overbearing marriage has tranquilized her into submission.…

    • 1351 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Mrs. Mallard feels that she was oppressed by marriage, and viewed life as dull and unchangeable as she “breathed a quick prayer that life might be long. It was only yesterday she had thought with a shudder that life might be long.” (288). The second sentence demonstrates a contrast of emotions because she now believes that life has meaning as she feels independent and essentially “free” from her husband. It is important to see her this way because it demonstrates the unexpectedness of her initial reaction.…

    • 980 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    My personal interpretation is that Mrs. Mallard has heart problems and the shock from hearing about the death of her husband was too much for her. The author mentions that she felt free after she heard the news about Mr. Mallard. I believe that Mrs. Mallard was not fully aware her husband was gone and never coming back. If she would have realized this she would have acted differntly once she realized that she would be doing everything on her own for the rest of her life. When Mrs. Mallard saw that her husband was still alive at the end of the story, she did not die from joy, instead she died of shock.…

    • 1028 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays

Related Topics