The article, Hawaii’s Wild Side, also has some characteristics of an inferior article. A flaw throughout Pollan’s argument is mainly pertained to his use of ethos. Pollan stated personal testimony to his readers and also stated few facts from their tour-guide Spot (Pollan Travel + Leisure). Perhaps, Pollan’s argument could have been strengthened if he would have researched more facts and statistics about the Kauai and Hawaii itself. Facts and statistics of how construction seems to take over every part of the world, and how it took over the other parts of Hawaii would have made for a healthier
The article, Hawaii’s Wild Side, also has some characteristics of an inferior article. A flaw throughout Pollan’s argument is mainly pertained to his use of ethos. Pollan stated personal testimony to his readers and also stated few facts from their tour-guide Spot (Pollan Travel + Leisure). Perhaps, Pollan’s argument could have been strengthened if he would have researched more facts and statistics about the Kauai and Hawaii itself. Facts and statistics of how construction seems to take over every part of the world, and how it took over the other parts of Hawaii would have made for a healthier