Johnson tries to make a claim, but fails to make it impactful by implementing too many details that do not sway the audience to either side. Her reasoning behind the many facts she provides show why or why not bottles should still be bought. Although the points addressed are informative, they do not influence the reader. Johnson’s credibility is lost from the use of biased sources for research, and trust for her is also lost as she doesn’t clearly state to which side of the issue she is on. Emotionally, however, she does a great job by making the audience feel bad for consuming water bottles; but also leaves the audience grateful for the life-saving water bottles. The lack of a counterargument doesn’t give the article a purpose; the article just states facts which will leave the Shorthorn audience uninterested. On the subject of plastic water bottle consumption, the reader will be left indifferent with little care of whether they keep consuming or switch to reusable
Johnson tries to make a claim, but fails to make it impactful by implementing too many details that do not sway the audience to either side. Her reasoning behind the many facts she provides show why or why not bottles should still be bought. Although the points addressed are informative, they do not influence the reader. Johnson’s credibility is lost from the use of biased sources for research, and trust for her is also lost as she doesn’t clearly state to which side of the issue she is on. Emotionally, however, she does a great job by making the audience feel bad for consuming water bottles; but also leaves the audience grateful for the life-saving water bottles. The lack of a counterargument doesn’t give the article a purpose; the article just states facts which will leave the Shorthorn audience uninterested. On the subject of plastic water bottle consumption, the reader will be left indifferent with little care of whether they keep consuming or switch to reusable