Hulbertmarch’s essay was straightforward and clear, which I appreciate, but she mainly proposed theories and presented research and findings. Her tone was optmistic and praising of our generation which was a rather genious approach because she is implanting her opinion into the piece in a positive light instead of simply criticizing all others. However, as a result of her proposition ideas she no longer is writing informationally about the subject, she is imputting her personal opinion. Opinion is obviously expected, however, she did not show any evidence to back up her beliefs other than that is just what she thinks is
Hulbertmarch’s essay was straightforward and clear, which I appreciate, but she mainly proposed theories and presented research and findings. Her tone was optmistic and praising of our generation which was a rather genious approach because she is implanting her opinion into the piece in a positive light instead of simply criticizing all others. However, as a result of her proposition ideas she no longer is writing informationally about the subject, she is imputting her personal opinion. Opinion is obviously expected, however, she did not show any evidence to back up her beliefs other than that is just what she thinks is