My working thesis is Americans should consider how eliminating, or at the very least, minimizing meat consumption in their diets could bring about positive change in this country (main point) by improving our overall health, transforming us into citizens who make choices that are informed and responsible, and forcing the food industry to meet American demands. …show more content…
One point I want to address is the fact that people consume an unnecessary excess of meat, which is damaging to our health. Another point is that we should be better informed and aware on how our food is being produced. Additionally, I believe that if enough Americans eliminated meat or refused to buy meat produced by factory farms that the big corporations would be forced to change to accommodate the consumer