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From outside the kitchen window came an unexpected thump. Althea’s mom Cecile looked out the window to see her little girl lying beneath the willow tree. Cecile swung open the white french doors, ran past the towering pillars down the grand marble staircase to the willow tree in the vibrant garden. Cradling her beloved daughter in her arms that had just fallen 12 feet from a branch on the swaying willow, she called for a doctor. As the doctor rushed to his calling Althea opened her eyes to see bright light, she blinked but what she saw or so she thought was a pigment of her imagination. All around swam brightly colored fish all shapes and sizes they swam freely as the water carried them through the soft ocean waters, Althea reached out to touch a orange fish when as hand grabbed hers …show more content…
“I don’t know, maybe we should pull her up” Another one of Althea’s friends exclaimed. What nobody knew was that Altha was just fine beneath the water she was enjoying the view of fish swimming around. She came up into the bright sun and looked around as all of her friends looked at her with confusion and worry. “What’s wrong? Oh my goodness did you see all those fish! It felt like I was there for hours. Did I win?” Now personality wise Altha is a girl who gets almost anything she want and grew up in a family that has quite a bit of money in California. She is caring and sweet but, she talks all the time and is known for quite long run on sentences according to her mother. “Yeah um, you definitely one but you were under there breathing. Like is that even possible?” Exclaimed Talia. “Hahaha I don’t even know! But it was kinda cool I could just watch the fish swim and touch the smooth coral!” Explained Altha. Exactly a year after the day at the beach Althea was lounging on the plush couches and flipped through the news channels. She wasn’t really paying attention to what she was going through until her eyes glanced at

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