Alternate Ending To The Beast

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The Beast By:Autumn Schweitzer
I survived the attack of the beast.The Beast was a black st. Bernard.But I was not the only one who lived i was with two others Lucas and Hannah.Lucas is my cousin and Hannah is my sister.My cousin lived with my grandma and my grandma lives in a little house with a big patch of woods in the back.The woods had a little creek in the back that went for miles.Thats when my sister decided it was a perfect day to adventure.

We packed a lunch in a bag and Lucas was getting drinks.I wonder if we will find any snakes or any fossils.
”Let’s go” I said getting mad.

“Hold on a second Autumn we are going as fast as we can” said Hannah as she snapped.

We head ed out the door with a big slam I jumped.
”Why are you
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“Spit it out already!” Lucas said with urgency. Hannah then whispered “We are not in grandma’s yard anymore” “I think we should go back” I said I was very scared of What could be in the yard. “No way!” Lucas shouted”We came out here to hike along the creek not to be a baby,come on!”

Lucas started walking I did not want to look like a baby and go back to grandma’s house alone telling her that I was not going to go with Lucas and Hannah down the creek,No Way!I followed them down the creek it was past the barbed wire that all of us managed to sneak under. It was very loud with noises till Lucas stepped on a rock with a loud CLASH!The hole creek went silent.It was like the hole world stopped.We stopped.I looked in front of us and Lucas had stopped he was scared.We all were scared.None of us even dared to move a muscle.I did not move I knew that no one was coming till at least 5:00 and it was only 2:00. The moment of silence stopped Hannah spoke up “I think it may be time to either move ahead or stop” We heard a branch crack hannah then stated to say ‘Who moved” When she was interrupted by a loud bark.I saw a black shadow across the way it looked like it was about 10 feet away.I felt like I could not breath.Then the big St. Bernard started to move out of the trees and into the
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It turned its head looking right at me.It started to growl.
“I am going to run”I told at Lucas and Hannah.
The dog looked away.I decided to go behind a tree.I then motioned Hannah and Lucas to come over to the tree with me so we could run. They did not move.I wondered why they did not move.When I realized the dog was looking right at them.I then threw a rock in the woods.The dog took off and tried to find the thing that that was making that noise.
I then ran with Lucas and Hannah right behind me.We ran through the creek splashing water and breaking whatever got in our way.Until we heard a loud bark.I felt like I had just been starred in a horror movie. The bark was loud and we heard crackling of sticks getting closer and closer.We finally could see the big dog getting closer.But we also saw the barbed wire we crossed to get on their property.We snuck through the bottom of the barbed wire.
We closed the barbed wire off and put rocks all over it so it would not budge. We stood that for a minute looking for the dog.It never came.We did not see the dog or hear the dog at all. The world went silent

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