Alternate Ending Of A Short Story

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Alternative ending to “The streak”

“Froggy, I just got the best news ever!” Jamie said
“What is that?” said Froggy
“ I'M GOING TO THE DANCE WITH Celia!” said Jamie “Are you for real?” Froggy asked.
“Yes, I am.” Jamie shouted. I can't believe that she asked me to the dance. I thought she didn't even like me. As I think to myself, I think Celia was wanting to ask me to the dance all this time.
“Froggy, i'm so happy that i'm going to the dance with Celia.” Jamie said“Froggy, thank you so much for helping me out.”
“ your welcome Jamie that is what friends are for right? “ said Froggy.
“Yup, shouted Jamie. if you're on a bad streak I will help you as much as I can get you on a good streak again, how does that sound? “Good, said Froggy.

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