Hey Rojia!
I really like how well written part one and part two was. Part one was nice and compact; for example, the first sentence, "Native American families were using personal and family connections in order to control all of their economical transactions". In other words, you explained kinship in such a simple and understanding way. Also, I liked how you brought up how Post- industrialized era women have become independent. It demonstrated how much society improved for women. Lastly, I agree about your statement that we are a diverse society and it portraying the "All American Family" is damaging to society.
Sincerely, Ben
I really like how well written part one and part two was. Part one was nice and compact; for example, the first sentence, "Native American families were using personal and family connections in order to control all of their economical transactions". In other words, you explained kinship in such a simple and understanding way. Also, I liked how you brought up how Post- industrialized era women have become independent. It demonstrated how much society improved for women. Lastly, I agree about your statement that we are a diverse society and it portraying the "All American Family" is damaging to society.
Sincerely, Ben