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Once upon a time there was this little boy named Alfred. Alfred wasn’t the most popular kid, but more of a down to earth kid. He wasn’t the most liked kid either, but Alfred used that hate, and drove toward his goal to make the middle school basketball team. Alfred attends Hudson Middle School. Alfred’s worst enemy thought he was the hotshot. Most call him Rome, but LaRome was his name. Rome didn’t understand that he had to do “his” work. So therefore he would copy others project’s, homework, and test. He would always be looked at like the star athlete and star student. Alfred hated when others would “cheat the system”. Alfred finally decided to snitch on Rome. Oh boy, was that a mistake.
Rome was questioned then finally caught. Rome was suspended
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But Rome didn’t know that Alfred has been practicing every day. So the 1v1 started, they flipped a coin to see who would get the ball first. Alfred chose heads, and won the coin toss. They checked it up, Rome is being cocky again through the ball at Alfred as a check. Alfred is now dribbling, cuts left, switched hands, and went back through his legs and splashed a three right in Rome’s face. Rome was stunted, he couldn’t believe what he has seen, the whole crowd was stunted. So Rome being his cocky self said “ayee that was a lucky shot”. They checked it up again. Now Alfred tried driving to the basket, that was easily stopped. Rome blocked him, and stole the ball. Rome took it back to the three point line, and shot. He had pulled an amazing shot, it had looked like the ball didn’t even touch the net. Now 3 to 3, Rome’s ball. Rome checked it up, cuts to the left and pop’s another 3 right in Alfred’s face. Alfred was stunned, he stood there with curiosity. Then Alfred started to study his moves, Alfred soon realized something. Rome was doing the same moves, but in a different way. Now, 5 to 3 Rome's balls. They checked it up, this time Alfred reads his move. So then Alfred cut left, forcing him to cut right. Then Alfred darted right and snatched the ball from Rome. Alfred drove to the basket, and made an easy lay up. Now all tied up Alfred’s ball. Alfred checked, then cut to the right, then made an immediate left. He left Rome in the dust and then he dropped back and shot a three. Now he’s up 3, 8 to 5. Alfred is feeling a little confident now, so he check’s up and shoots. But this time he missed the shot. Rome grabbed the ball and takes it back and started to drive. He does more than an adequate job of filling in the paint to score an easy 2. Rome is still down 1 point. Rome takes another 3, this time a bank shot. Now he’s up 2, Alfred’s beginning to get worried. They check up, and Alfred now thinking

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