Ahh Hawaii Short Story

Storyline: Ahh, Hawaii, such a great place to visit. The palm trees sway in the nice cool breeze and the sun shines and makes your eyes sparkle. The hot sand tickles your feet, and the sound of waves soothes your ears. Ahh, Hawaii, nothing can go wrong in Hawaii. Well, this beautiful place isn't as great as it sounds, criminals lurk ever alleyway and citizens cower in fear, no tourist knows the dark secrets that lie in this tropical land. But young Jim Holloway and his friends and family are unfortunate enough to crash on this secretive island, how will Jim save his friends and protect his family from the dangers ahead, find out by reading Separated! Jim was laying on the hot yellow …show more content…
He had to find his dad, he was the only one he knew and loved. His dad was the only family he could remember, Jim started running through the green forest. Jim stopped running, he smelled smoke, he thought to himself smoke isn't supposed to start on its own. He thought about other people who were trying to signal others, he thought maybe it was his dad. He was getting closer to the smell and the smoke cloud, he saw a crashed airplane which had been on fire recently, Jim said, "is anyone here"? He started walking closer to the wreck and his heart started beating faster, every step he took increased the pace of his hearts beating. His heart was now pounding out of his chest and he started entering the plane. He saw a backpack full of a day's supply of food than he heard the sound of pain and agony. He saw a boy with clothes which were once white but now had dust and stains on them. The boy's hair was jet black and his brown eyes twinkled. The boy almost looked like Jim, Jim and the boy's eyes connected and they both looked at each other. The boy said please "help me". Jim ran to him and said, "are you okay"? The boy said "yes, but my leg hurts". Jim walked up to the boy and saw his leg, it had a nasty cut. He tied his leftover vine on it and then said: "how does it feel". The boy responded, "thanks, and it feels better". Jim said, "what's your name and do you know where we are and how we got her"? The boy said my …show more content…
Mark said, "I was going as a student to study in India, why were you going"? Jim replied, "I can't remember why". Jim said, "Mark will you help me find my dad"? Mark replied "sure, I have nothing else to do, so why not". Mark said, "but my leg still hurts"! Jim replied, "I'll go get some more vine from trees and you stay here". Jim walked into the cold jungle at night looking for a fallen vine. Jim gathered small vines and tied them together to make a bigger and stronger vine. Jim saw Mark sitting and kneeled down to tie the vine. He gently wrapped the vine around the wounded leg, he had succeeded in making a perfect support for Mark's leg. (End of