Agreed Revisions The first revision we agreed with was the wording of our title. The wording would have been confusing and not at a fifth grade level. The second revision we agreed with was some wording in a few of the questions. For example, one of the questions said, “I feel the school administration doesn’t know bullying exists.” The suggestion was to use “isn’t aware that bullying exists.” We thought this was wording that was more understandable for students. There were also a few “not” reversal questions that the revisors suggested different wording for the statements, and we also accepted that feedback and changed it in our survey. Also, the revisors suggested we use “my school” in the survey statements, instead of “this …show more content…
We agreed with this statement, some of the demographics participants may feel uncomfortable answering because they are unsure of how the data will be used. As researchers, we thought it was a worthy suggestion and decided to add that check box to our survey. Also in the demographic portion of the questionnaire, we were advised that we could add nonbinary for the gender selection, heterosexual and homosexual for the sexual orientation section, African American for the race section, and a write-in for religious affiliation section. We agreed with these helpful suggestions, and we were happy someone looked over the questionnaire to make sure it was mutually exclusive. For us as researchers, we agreed with the reminder that we needed to put the reversal statement numbers at the bottom of each page. We had only bolded them to remember them for the first draft. Also, a suggestion was made that we use an indentation below the question for aesthetic purposes. We noted the suggestion as worthy because the questionnaire did look a little bit confusing and hard to follow without the