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In considering my lifetime goals, I have to discuss my past experiences in order for the Admission Committee to have insight into my journey to achieve academic excellence with the ultimate goal of becoming a part of the medical community. As far as I can remember, I always wanted to be part of the medical community; I believe that this quest started from my mother’s womb. The reason for this statement is because my mother experienced two great losses during her pregnancy with me; the loss of her sister who passed away after a short-term battle with cancer, and the loss of her best friend to a fatal gunshot wound due to a long-term battle with domestic violence. I genuinely believe I felt my mother’s heartache and pain within during these difficult moments in her life. Even though such heartache and pain plagued my mother, she tells me that I was the gift she needed to survive these moments. Unfortunately, one year after my birth; my grandmother passed away due to an unfortunate medical mishap.

My grandmother had a benign tumor the size of a pea on the right-side of her brain, and was advised that surgery was necessary to avoid potential growth; therefore, she elected to have the less invasive brain procedure using the Stereotactic Navigational System (SNS). On the day of the
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Upon making this decision, I put my plans into motion. First by becoming grade focused while being an athlete. In other words, I wanted to become a “true student-athlete” with the grades to match the title. Upon my arrival at Cypress Ranch High School, I decided first and foremost that my primary goal would to become an academically well-rounded student. I knew that it would be tough, but I was determined to reach my

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