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One specific idea I gained during the semester is how to write essay logically. When writing ad analysis essay I read and followed the instructions provided by the professor. I learned to write the essay in an order so that the reader can easily follow the purpose of my writing. Therefore, I did well in the first draft of ad analysis essay. Some corrections and revision on the first draft of ad analysis essay made the third draft fantastic. I spent a long time to gather the ideas and sources for the RBAA essay. To be honest, I collected so many sources and supporting ideas for the argument which I failed to put in order. Consequently, my thesis statement was unclear that reader could not understand. However, I revised the first draft of RBAA

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