I am recommending a specific example and a statistic to help Freddy Herrera's presentation to persuade more efficient. Our textbook explains that examples are "specific instances used to illustrate your point"(Nelson, Titsworth, & Pearson, 2013, p.106). I recommend that Freddy Herrera engages more with the audience with eye contact. Because of the majority of the video, he kept looking to the side. And if he will actively persuade eye contact is a must. Our textbook tells us descriptive statistics can give precise details during the presentation (Nelson, Titsworth, & Pearson, 2013, p.109). Therefore, I recommend the statistic of According to Quantified Impressions an adult make eye contact during a conversation 30-60%. But to make a connection
