Abandoned Asylum Narrative

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My friends and I decided to sneak into the abandoned asylum just outside of town. We wish we never would have gone inside. So when we went in we heard a scary noise and ran out then I said ¨Let´s play basketball that will get that scary voice out our mind. Then when we was playing nobody else was there except Aj, Jeanisha and I all we heard was a ball bounce and we saw a person behind us he asked us do yall want to play a 2 vs 2. You know we said yes because we love basketball, we asked what his name is he said “Bear.¨ Then we played are basketball game. He asked us if we wanted to come to his house we said sure so when we got there he introduced us to his family we played the game, and ate dinner then we left.
The next day Aj and I went

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