APA Quote Analysis

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When writing a paper quotation can potentially add significance and value to a paper when used correctly. However, when submitting a properly cited APA paper or essays at Bethel University, the student will not utilize more than “15% direct quotations” (Bethel University, 2014, p. 8). The reason for minimizing the direct quotes within a student’s writing is two-fold. First, when using excessing quotes, the writer loses their voice and ideology, and the chance of plagiarizing the source is considerably higher (Ridley, 20??). Secondly, numerous quotes tend to interrupt the flow of the work and can cause boredom in the reader. So, in an effort to allow the writer to present their premise clearly, and retain continuity Bethel University restricts

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