Introductory statement: This essay is about the medicine of the Civil War;
Thesis statement: The medicine in the Civil war was very unsanitary.
Body
First Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence): The Civil War had any amputations because of the type of bullets they used.
The bullets in the civil war were humongous compared to today's standards. They shattered any bones they hit.
This, and the poor antibiotics, were the major cause for the civil war numerous amputations.
Second Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):The Civil War hospitals were full of open latrines, decomposing food, and unclean water.
This contributed to a lot of deaths in the Civil War.
They actually had a death rate of ¾ people when performing an amputation.