Amanda's Theory: A Short Story

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John and his sister Amanda lived in a town called Greensburg. John had a friendly personality and his sister had a very curious personality. They both lived in a normal brown house near the beach. When they weren’t doing homework, or when they weren’t at school, they played together at the beach. Greensburg was known as a creepy town after being founded in 1856 by an Infamous criminal, known as Tom Perry strange stuff started to happen people would report to see Mermaids,Ghosts and flashing red lights. John and his Sister Amanda Moved to Greensburg after their town had been invaded by foes and people were dying because of starvation,rough times,and they were sent to work in factories that paid meager wage.After they moved to Greensburg they …show more content…
Now you might Think the story ends here with John and Amanda getting caught and meeting the same end as their mother but not quite at all their Father who saw his wife dead found out about the doll because of the screams of his children he had ran out of the house with a metal shovel he threw it at the Doll and said get away from my children you Psycho doll and then the shovel hit the doll throwing it in the water there was a splash as the doll burst into pieces nor human nor artificial but swirls of black and white that sucked the doll in the hole and then their was a bang as the doll disappeared but then a huge wave swept them away for they were at sea and then they blacked out.When Amanda woke up she saw a hospital room and asked, where are we, are we dead, but she heard a nurse whisper to her you and your Dad and Brother were swept away By a wave If it Hadn’t been for your Father you and your brother would have died and also Your Brother and Dad are fine they just received two cuts and some …show more content…
Then John said well pea brain you 're not that bad of a little sister and then he left.Meanwhile an Evil hand pops out from the Ocean and says hah i am not dead yet as it popped up from the ocean and seeking revenge once more began to try to find john and

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