Hattie Mcclaren: A Short Story

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Hattie McClaren's body lays in the most peculiar fashion. Her feet point toward the door and her face is scrunched in agony, her hands stretch upward.

"Madame," Angela asks, "This is no accident. The signs point to that she was strangled, based off of the bruising on her neck. It was done by someone small, probably female. We must look in to the maids and the students. Let's find a connection."

Jennie nods somberly, tears flowing.

"What might you be able to tell me about Hattie, Madame?"

Madame stares at Angela in the most offended manner, saying, "You can't take this investigation, Angela! We must have the police investigate properly."

Jennie rises from the bed to answer Angela.

"Hattie is twenty three, originally from New York City.
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The only interesting clue is a pendant around Hattie's neck that is oddly tucked into her blouse. The chain is gold and the pendant is a locket with the intials ABT engraved in a lacey cursive font. Angela quietly dusts for fingerprints, but the locket has been wiped clean. She places her fingernail in between the opening and opens the locket. Inside is a small photograph of a family. Angela instantly recognizes one of the people as Hattie. The four others are all familiar. This is a smaller print of the photo on Madame's desk. It's clearly Madame's family, but there are two daughters and a husband. On the other side was a different There's somewhere else Angela's seen this photo, but she can't quite place it. Perhaps it was in the newspaper? Angela quietly slips the locket in an evidence bag and then pockets it. She wants to be the one to bring this to Madame. Angela slips into the library because there is something she needs to confirm in order to test her theory. It checks out, and Angela is one step closer to understanding why Hattie McClaren was killed.

Angela returns to the maid's room in order to find more evidence. In Hattie's personal belongings she finds identification and numerous newspaper clippings that are at least five years old. Hattie's passport confirms who she is, Harriet Johanna McClaren of Birmingham, England. She's originally from Dublin, Ireland. After being a nanny for five years in England, she came to the states in order to work as a maid. The odd thing was, she came to the Academy to work right away. This certainly fits Angela's latest theory, but she felt the need to determine more facts about this

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