Grace Robertson did well in her introduction. She used many captivating details that caught my attention. One being, “The pimps will frequently continue to rape and beat the women in an effort to control them as well as force them to work ten to eighteen hour days in which the customers themselves may enforce abuse of their own. Sadly, the majority of these women will only live an additional two to four years after being trafficked (Yen 659-660)” (Robertson). This being said she also uses many different sources. This adds to her credibility because you do not just have to take her word for it; she uses other people’s word and perspectives to back her own perspective and opinion up. Grace uses sixteen different sources. Grace is also wrote a
