For example, in the tenth paragraph, Tan indicates “ One time it was a call to her stock-broker in New York. She has cashed out her small portfolio and it just so happened we were going to go to New York the next week.” Tan use the specific example to demonstrate her mother treated unequal by the stockbroker and convey the anger and sympathy emotion to the audience. The audience feels sympathy Mr. Tan deceived by the stockbroker and anger with the stockbroker. Like the Tan, authors Chou and Feagin also describe the phenomenon about American discriminate the Asian immigrant. They declare “ Bari, a South Asian International student who has been in the United States for some year…He was riding along a road on the edge of major university campus when two white men drove by and assaulted him “I was riding my bike until he came in big white van and hit me with a baseball bat and took off.” Also, as I am the audience, I feel the sympathy to the boy with him bad experience. I feel anger with the white guy hurt the Chinese boy because of the discrimination. This example is powerful to support Tan’s idea that immigrants suffered unequal treatment and therefore makes Tan’s audience easily to trust the immigrants are definitely treated unequal by …show more content…
However, facts are given by Tan didn’t seem credible and I think that some of facts are exaggerated. For example, in the tenth paragraph, she declares that “ My mother has long realized the limitations of her English as well. When I was fifteen, she used to have me call people on the phone to pretend I was she. In this guise, I was forced to ask for information or even to complain and yell people who had been rude to her” With my experience, I couldn’t deal with the important stuff like Tan mentioned. I don’t know how to handle the relationship with others until I was eighteen years old. As a result, Tan’s audience and I all hard to believe that a fifteen years girl can successful deal with the relationship with others. The author Tan not only exaggerated her personal experience but also exaggerated her mother’s worst English skill. In the seventh paragraph, she reveals that“Yet some of my friends tell me they understand fifty percent of what my mother says….some say they understand none of it.” I think that it’s unbelievable for Tan’s friends to understand none of the Tan’s mother words. Even though Tan’s mother has deep accent, it's doesn’t matter for others to understand what she is saying. As a result, these experience sounds unbelievable for the audience, and