A Rhetorical Analysis Of Mckayla's Molested A Gymnast

Improved Essays
This article is about how a gymnastics team physician has molested a gymnast since age 13, along with many others. Although this article centers around one girl, McKayla Maroney. McKayla’s being molested started under the guise of “medically necessary treatment” this treatment started at age 13 and the article hasn’t mentioned what age at which it stopped. McKayla stated her story in a twitter post under the hashtag #MeToo, a campaign sparked by the abuse claims against Harvey Weinstein. McKayla states that, “this is happening everywhere” and that while she did what she had to do to get to her dream, it was “unnecessary and disgusting.” The article mentions how everyone who stands up and shares their story has quite a lot of courage. Because …show more content…
I’m incredibly glad that Nassar has been stopped and that he will not be harming anymore innocent people. I’m outraged that she felt that she had to keep this to herself for 8 years. I agree with her that this is happening everywhere. I truly think that we need a way to stop it and not let people hurt others in the ways that they do. I know it can be hard to let people see that you can be vulnerable even if it means that justice is more likely to be served. I never have understood why people traumatize others like they do. I mean how can you be so self-centered that you only care about your own wants and not the needs of others. Those are the people that I truly hate and will never understand. I’m very sure that these are the kinds of people that belong in jail and that they need to be stopped, although I have no idea how we would do so. We need to find a way to stop this. Change is in order and I don’t want to live in fear to walk on the streets alone at night, as a child that isn’t something I need to do. I still fear the day that I do. I don’t want my niece to be raised in a world like

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    Kayla Webley, the author of the piece, does an impeccable job of appealing to not only the reader's trust with her use of ethos, but also to the reader's logic by using several statistics. By adding several testimonies, she is able to get her point across while convincing the audience that what she is saying is valid. However, the author does a below average job of appealing to the emotions of the audience. Her emotional tactics are very in-effective, as she could have shown the hardships that students in debt face, however she simply used their testimony to show how much debt they face.…

    • 690 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Society was impacted by the Larry Nassar case because he did sexual assault so many young women with one or both of their parents in the room. “Little girls don’t stay little forever. They grow up into strong women that return to destroy your world”(Stephens). This quote shows that when and if this would happen to someone do not be scared to come forward about it because then it can keep happening and in this case with Kyle Stephens is true it happened to her for six years. Even with her telling her parents and counselors.…

    • 1355 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Rape is a powerful word that can cause a lot of pain to a victim. The thought of being categorized as a “victim”, is not what one may hope for. Yet, there is always a possibility that the victim may not report this horrific crime. In the book Missoula, we hear the stories of brave young women who came forward to tell their stories. Yet,what makes these cases so appalling is how they were handled.…

    • 1004 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Jeannette Walls and her family have gone through a lot, as seen in her book The Glass Castle. As a young girl she faced bullying, poverty, alcoholism, and sexual assault. She was often brought into these situations by her parents and was told to ignore it. Rape and sexual assault are very real, important matters of discussion and the reality can be shocking. People should be taught to report anything that has happened without feeling ashamed or judged.…

    • 1429 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    Capital City of Rape In the article by the Atlantic, a news reporter Sara Bernard wrote an article titled “Rape Culture in the Alaskan Wilderness.” Readers are introduced to some touching stories about rape of innocent children and women’s in the great state of Alaska, which is part of American territory. The writer Started the article by mentioning a story of a girl named Jane in the article, who was touched and raped by more than one people she new before, either one of her drunk father friend’s or elderly who she thought of as a grandfather. Rape cases often went unreported, and the statistic that showed the number of raped cases is unreliable, because most of victims prefer silence.…

    • 1325 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Sexism In Australia

    • 565 Words
    • 3 Pages

    Mothers are still being discriminated in the workforce and it’s our fault By Isabel Grosu Even in contemporary Australian society and Western culture, the issue of sexism is still visibly present. 1 in 2 (49%) mothers experienced discrimination in the workplace as shown by a recent survey conducted by the Australian Rights Commission. Discrimination against mothers in the workplace is regrettably not uncommon.…

    • 565 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Sex Abuse Case Summary

    • 821 Words
    • 4 Pages

    From January 16 to 24 in 2018, 156 women read Victim Impact Statements. I watched a video of the first testimony by Kyle Stephens, previously identified only as "Victim Z.A.", of the several testimonies in this case ("Comprehensive Timeline of the Larry Nassar Case"). Stephens was one of the first victims to come to the stand to speak about the abuse she received at the hands of Nassar and was also the only victim to not be part of the USA Gymnastics team. I saw her words and statements…

    • 821 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In Maria W. Stewart's lecture in Boston in 1832, she conveys her position on the injustices of slavery and the cruelty that slaves experiences through the use of diction, figurative language, and her own personal experience. Altogether, these create a sense of injustice and desparity for the cause of the African Americans and their freedoms and aspirations to be something more than just servile labor. Diction is a major influence in this lecture. With a variety of words, such as "chains", "ragged", "drudgery and toil", "exhausted", "death", and "cruel", Stewart appeals to the feelings of people in an attempt to make them understand the hardships and extreme injustice that encompass the life of a slave. To continue, there is also another set…

    • 595 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Traits of a Great Persuasive Piece The author, Laura Spinney, uses a variety of persuasive skills and techniques in the article, “How Facebook, fake news and friends are warping your memory”. She uses Ethos, Pathos, Logos, and a variety of arguments to get her point across. Laura Spinney’s use of these skills is fairly effective at convincing the reader that fake news and misinformation lead to altered memories that affect how people view the past and the future. Spinney uses a wide variety of evidence in a way that convinces readers to change their perspectives in a somewhat successful way.…

    • 1525 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Some will take great pleasure and feel a sense of power by simply knowing that they are the cause of another’s pain and emotional distress. By their manipulation, they are in control of their target’s emotions and of their relationships with others. They display absolutely no remorse or shame in the psychological harm and trauma that they cause to their victim, unless of course, they are…

    • 513 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Child sexual abuse leaves a huge impact on its victims. Following child sexual abuse initial effects include fear, anger, hostility, guilt and shame, low self-esteem, anxiety, early overt sexual behavior and behavioral disturbances; these same feelings can last into adulthood. Childhood sexual abuse survivors may experience depression, anxiety, sleep disorders, dissociation, low self-esteem and Post Traumatic Shock Disorder . The article Sexual Abuse Histories of Young Women in the U.S. Child Welfare System informs that rape, being tortured or a victim of terrorists and molestation are the types of drama associated with PTSD (Breno, AL, and MP Galupo). Incest child sexual abuse survivors may have more severe problems, especially if the offender…

    • 790 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Date rape remains a common problem in the United States. Although typically misunderstood and unreported, the crime of unwanted intercourse brought upon by a familiar individual has become a subject of national concern. Authors Camille Paglia and Susan Jacoby express their opposing views as to the cause of the crime in their articles “Rape: A Bigger Danger Than Feminists Know” and “Common Decency”. While Paglia and Jacoby have conflicting arguments, Jacoby's use of ethos, logos and pathos outdo that of Paglia's, making her argument the most effective of the two regarding who is at fault for the crime of date rape. Susan Jacoby is a well-known writer and newspaper reporter which gives her much credibility.…

    • 2004 Words
    • 9 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Great Essays

    What Universities can do to prevent sexual assault on Campuses The camera panned into a single white framed window. Lady Gaga was dressed in all white sitting at a beautiful white piano with darkness in the background. Her voice was full of the kind of emotion that made you stand still. Her words were loud, dramatic and honest.…

    • 2035 Words
    • 9 Pages
    Great Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In February 2016, Beyonce did a super bowl halftime show performance that provoked controversy all over the world. An editor from Salon Media group named Natasha Lennard, wrote a commentary named, “Why are cops taking Beyonce’s black affirmation as an attack?” after hearing that multiple police officers made the decision to boycott the halftime show. Lennard was puzzled when society began to say that Beyonce’ was attacking police officers during her ‘Formation’ performance. She suggests that Beyonce was simply being an advocate for African Americans not attacking the police force.…

    • 802 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Campus Safety: An Annotated Bibliography Bagenstos, Samuel R. " What went wrong with Title IX?" Washington Monthly Sept.-Oct.…

    • 1020 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Decent Essays