I like how you start out with the statement that the video is a 'problem-solution argument'. With that, it establishes the tone in which you will critic the video and its argument. You provide historical backing to the statement that you provide in the first paragraph, which opens the reads eyes on how recent it was when women's did not have any rights and how far they have come in just a little under a century. You make the connection from the cult of domesticity to women's voting rights in a very professional manner. You establish evidence that the phrase "like a girl" is still being used in today's schooling systems in a rather offensive way. You show the connection from the video to various rhetorical appeals such as pathos and logos. Additionally,
