A Rhetorical Analysis Of Apple

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The purpose of my writing project was to educate my audience on what rhetorical analysis is, how it is used in our daily lives, and how having a greater understanding of it makes for better writing. My audience for the project consisted of undergraduate college students like myself, specifically first-years, who use the website Writingspaces.org, to enhance their writing ability. I felt that the best part of my paper was my rhetorical analysis of Apple. It acts as a great example of how to break down an advertisement for a company whose products are sought after by most college-aged students. Two aspects of this project I struggled with most were, the organization of my paragraphs and maintaining the genre of a Writingspaces.org article.

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