A Rhetorical Analysis Of Anne Lamott From Bird By Bird

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Anne Lamott from Bird by Bird (1994) explains to us in her article that we all need to write those “shitty first drafts” in order for us to write the “sometimes brilliance second and third drafts.” Anne Lamott is an entertaining writer and makes some very valid points about why it is important to let go in your first drafts. Lamott explains that writing does not come easy even to the best of writers and compares it to pulling teeth. Our first draft in writing should be our “child’s draft;” where we pour out all of our thoughts in an attempt to organize it into our writing. Anne Lamott explains to us that sometimes she just needs to type to get her fingers moving, or even type her first draft twice as long as it needs to be. Throughout

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