A Reflective Essay On Lieutenant Ebanks

I would say that my characters are quite distinctive as each show different emotional levels. For example Devin is emotionally all over the place throughout the script where as the Priestess has this strong personality to her in that she looks down on everyone because she feels much higher than them. I would say it’s quite hard to say whether my characters are believable or not because with everything that goes on in the plot, it’s not something that could ever happen really, it’s pure fiction so with my characters I’ve tried to make them as believable as possible by the way each one reacts to this type of scenario. I would say that not all my characters are three-dimensional, for example like Lieutenant Ebanks, he’s more of a one-sided character that doesn’t help move the plot forward, he’s just there really which makes him more disposable in that if someone were to die, it’s definitely going to Lieutenant Ebanks. And with some other characters like Elroy and the Young Woman, we don’t get to see …show more content…
In some cases I would say that the dialogue does move the plot forward but I mainly used actions for that because if some actions didn’t happen, how could I have the dialogue to go with it? I do think that the dialogue is effective because it showcases the different emotions being felt from the different characters which is mostly fear in which if I didn't show the fear in these characters, it takes away the impact of the scares in the script for the audience in which if all this bad stuff is happening and if the dialogue doesn't show that fear these characters feel, the audience will find it much harder to relate with any of the characters. I believe that dialogue if needed improvement would be to find other synonyms for some the words to make it sound clearer I guess, but I feel at the moment the dialogue does what it needs to do and it