A Narrative Essay On Jake Parker

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It is a cold winter night in Lubbock, Texas. A sophomore student at Texas Tech University named Brooklyn peters decided it was a date night for her and her boyfriend, Jake Parker. Brooklyn chose to go to Benihana to celebrate almost 2 years together, and thankfully, the restaurant was not too far from the campus, so they walked. At dinner they have a great time and as they are walking back, Jake asks Brooklyn, “I know a shortcut through the alley. It’s like 15 minutes faster, want to take it? And Brooklyn replies trusting him “Sure, why not. My feet are killing me!” she complains.
As they are walking through the dark, spooky alley, Brooklyn gets this weird feeling in her stomach that someone is watching her. So Brooklyn speeds up a bit and looks over her shoulder. From a distance she sees a tall, black, slender shadow standing about 10 meters away from them. Jake looked at her and asks confused “what’s wrong?” and Brooklyn says with a shaky voice while point at the figure, “look.” They both stand as still as a deer during hunting season. The figure starts to sprint towards them and as they get closer, you
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Then Kylie remembered something, “wait! They went to Benihana! We can check around there.” When they finally arrive to Benihana, they ask the hostess if they remember seeing a couple there around 9:30 pm last night, and of course, nothing.
After they have completely given up, Adam asks with a melancholy tone, “Hey, we can take the shortcut through the alley; it’s about 10 minutes quicker.” And Kylie agrees. As they are walking through the alley, they see a puddle the size of a pool of red fluid. Kylie, kind of freaked out, carefully examines the substance, and figures out its blood. As she turns around to tell Adam about the blood, she sees him give a little grin, walk over to a dumpster, and grabs a knife beside

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