Pubali mentions “girls are a burden” that bringing a newborn female into the Indian world is a concern, a comment he supports …show more content…
That is the ugly, unvarnished truth”.Your assertion of this fact gives me the impression you want this to be embedded with us throughout the article. You have also added “We need to face this fact in order to change it”, do Indians know they hate women? Where did you come up with this fact as it is the first time i'm hearing it. India does not hate women. Women hates India! “A rape occurs every 20 minutes in India” so how might one legitimize “India hates women” when girls are being raped, and especially in this scenario “iron rod inserted in her vagina, and savagely beaten”. It is only appropriate to say that women hates India. In the second paragraph, you describe the hell which the “ 23 year old victim” experiences, the paragraph creates a disturbing image, which makes me realise you want the readers to feel sorrow for her. You also describe the 3 other tragic events of rape of other women, starting with “like”, this shows the similarities the girls shared and undoubtedly, the depressed and angered tone you